A day I'll never forget.
Word List: white, still, untouched, wet, feelings like flying through hyperspace, slippery, cold, fragile
Descriptive paragraph: I watch from my car window as the white confetti falls from the sky peacefully. Each flake falling and landing wherever it chooses to. I sit there for a few moments in silence, as people hustle through the parking lot, just trying to get wherever they are going. But I stopped. I paused and admired the stillness of the snow. The way little colorless flurries took up so much space on this planet. Looking up at the sky, it felt like it would never end and we would live in a snowglobe forever.

Hi there! I love your descriptive words, they are beautiful and one of them reminded me of a metaphor I originally had on my list. It was a note on how the snow falling looks like the stars in the universe. I think it's a beautiful descriptor. The "white confetti" also creates just this absolute child-like wonder in your writing that casts a snowy day in a really happy light. Great job! I love your photo as well.
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